The water
in our basin
is shallow
yet murky.
The future is colluding in darkness
right before our
myopic eyes.
The presentation will
dazzle
Leaving one question:
"What more could I have done"?
dazzle
Leaving one question:
"What more could I have done"?
The above is my submission (with illegal edits) for this weekend Trifecta writing challenge (http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/) for which I was to add 30 words to the three words offered: Myopic, Dazzle, and Basin.
My poem (the first poem I've every written) might be cheesy or possibly even suck but it describes last Wednesday perfectly for me.
i enjoy looking at your "cut out" words. dazzle is italicized and playfully placed.
ReplyDeleteplayfully? I say "unexpectedly".Nothing playful here I'm afraid
ReplyDeleteThe future is colluding in darkness - what a beautiful line!
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